Don't believe a word of it.You would be a hard one to fool. Should I be penitent for these provocative utterances?This comment is a tribute to your intelligence:)
I have to believe that those too-clever types never truly find happiness.
My, how I know that feeling. I was tricked by too many of those too-clever types. I almost let one of them trick me twice, but that would have made me double the fool.
Know it face it! good one...
i like the repetition and the rhythm in this, very clever. And I don't think you'd be taken in ;)
Enough is quite sufficient. Forget her, and go buy a beer.
Aww... I've felt that way and it's no fun.
Very well said. That penitent look can be such a sham.
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This is beautiful !!!
Robin, once again your poetry amazes. As talented a storyteller as you are, I think this affects your poetry... the characters are vivid and the emotions are raw at times. This one, with that repeat in the final stanza, BRILL! Amy
I agree with Amy your poetry is solid as a heart of stone..though your heart is anything but..
How sad that you can't trust them.