That''ll be one bad timing with a side of hash brown gnats.Funny, this wordle seems to lend itself to desire.
From a web of desire to the sad end!! It came crashing down like a tonne of bricks!! Each verse seems like it is dedicated to a creature and for me the second verse reminds me of two glow-worms in love!! ;)
Something about it I didn't like...to love and be eaten...no thanks.
It happens. We love what we eat? I think we do or we wouldn't eat it! Interesting wordling.
One wonders at times why the males haven't gotten wise to the whole practice and gone their own way, continuation of the species be damned. I know a few people who would be very happy if they never saw another spider, although I like them just fine, as long as they are small.
gerat concept, Old Egg. writtenwith that delicious fear and trembling when faced with a new'exciting' lover- who just maycrush usbut have hope - it could be theother way around.
That is an interesting point of view. Usually they are just stepped on. You have added a reason to think before we crush.
It is indeed bleak to be eaten..more so to be caught in the trap..your poetry has a dark thread at times..which of course..i love..
yes indeed, bad timing can be the death on you
Isn't there a species of spider that when they mate, the female then eats the male? For me this is inferred in your chilling wordle.
I laughed out loud when I read this and tip my hat to anyone who can write from an insect's perspective! Love it! :)http://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2013/05/19/nebulous/
It creates a frightful impression of being caught in a spider's claws - a big spider! Nicely!Hank
I think many of us have been "eaten" in love!Whirling with Robert Frost
That title is a killer.
What a title!!gravity rolls around defying physics
Fascinating twist with those wordless! Nice job.
Really lovely Old. It's always such a treat to come here for love poems. You're so good at them. :)
I have exceptionally bad timing, it borders on supernatural at times! This is a gorgeous, emotional, and raw poem I loved it =)
It is all about desire, Robin. Well done.Pamela
This is fabulous, iced with a black widow ending.
Very well done. Gave me shivers to imagine seeing a spider cut open on the slab and eaten.
Spiders as in all things in nature have a unique way of survival.