Sunday, 26 May 2013

You are my anchor



You are my anchor

And I the beam in your eyes

Close even though apart

 

We’re links that connect

Life’s never ending current

Fertile in our love

 

Our hearts beat as one

Layers of a joyful life

Poetic phrasing

 

We range far and wide

Even shifting sands see us

And yield to our strength
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19 comments:

  1. Unknown26 May 2013 at 03:44

    To have found that anchor and to be that special someone's beam in their eyes, no matter close or apart, is truly a wonderful connection to have found!

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  2. Nanka26 May 2013 at 03:53

    Makes a happy duo!! May they ever be joyful and grow in strength!!

    There is a lot of togetherness and confidence in the poem unlike longing and yearning even though apart!!!!

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  3. annell426 May 2013 at 05:05

    An anchor seems like a good thing, but could also drag one down, even drown one......hummmmm

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  4. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)26 May 2013 at 05:26

    Oh I love this! Renewed my vows last Saturday and I went on snd on - this would have bern perfect! :)

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  5. Magical Mystical Teacher26 May 2013 at 07:17

    What a lovely tribute to the one you love!

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  6. Veronica Roth26 May 2013 at 09:01

    Yup, and there it is! Well done Old. I was just complaining that I couldn't make anything romantic out of the words even with heart and close... Good thing I tend not to read until after I've written the whirl. :) Really lovely; well done you.

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  7. Marianv26 May 2013 at 10:20

    Some of the secrets of a long relationship...lovely

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  8. vivinfrance26 May 2013 at 11:21

    I do enjoy a good love poem, and this answers that description beautifully.

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  9. Maggie Grace26 May 2013 at 11:34

    What a dreamy poem of true lasting love!

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  10. kaykuala26 May 2013 at 16:20

    We’re links that connect
    Life’s never ending current
    Fertile in our love

    A most satisfying set-up of unending love. The poem flows very smoothly! Nicely!

    Hank

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  11. irene26 May 2013 at 17:39

    I feel the strong connection.

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  12. teri26 May 2013 at 19:18

    That last stanza really brings the whole poem home.

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  13. Ann (bunnygirl)26 May 2013 at 22:38

    True words describing true love. The mad passion is just crashing waves, but what endures is indeed the anchor.

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  14. Anonymous27 May 2013 at 20:22

    A lovely love poem. Heartfilled and thoughtful.

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/05/26/before-breaking-silence/

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  15. Cathy28 May 2013 at 18:53

    What a sweet and tender poem :) Beautiful done too because it just flow so wonderfully

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  16. LaTonya Baldwin29 May 2013 at 03:27

    Hello fellow romantic! I do my best to address other themes, but my heart belongs to lovers.

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  17. J Cosmo Newbery29 May 2013 at 03:39

    A charming and gentle poem. Nicely done.

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  18. flaubert29 May 2013 at 09:20

    Beautifully romantic poem, old egg. Not an easy feat and you have written it beautifully.

    Pamela

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  19. Jules31 May 2013 at 11:58

    I have noticed that when older couples walk hand in hand in the park - respect is given.

    Thanks for your visit.
    We will have to see if Porter gets home next week or later...
    Depends on the word list.

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