Wednesday, 15 May 2013

Helpless in love



Helpless in my love

You, the bright star in the night

Beauty in my eyes

 

We know each other

You trample on my sad glance

And laugh in my face

 

Though you are wary

Vigilant to my advance

Your eyes show your trust

 

I will wait until

You take my hand and kiss me

Helpless in our love
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12 comments:

  1. LaTonya Baldwin15 May 2013 at 17:19

    I never get tired of a good love poem. Enjoyed. And thanks for coming by.

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  2. Ann (bunnygirl)15 May 2013 at 20:31

    Patience is a great virtue in love.

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  3. Alice Audrey15 May 2013 at 20:34

    Sweet. :)

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  4. rallentanda15 May 2013 at 23:43

    Trample
    is hiding somewhere!
    I agree love must be mutual. One sided situations are hopless.

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  5. Unknown16 May 2013 at 02:43

    I'm reading your poem with birds singing in the background outside which just adds to the sweetness here!

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  6. Nanka16 May 2013 at 03:46

    Trample had to be somewhere in that second verse!! Looks like she has trampled all over your heart!!

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  7. Old Egg16 May 2013 at 04:22

    Thank you Nanka, I must have edited Trample out before posting. It is back in there now.

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  8. Unknown16 May 2013 at 05:07

    Roses are red, violets are - violet,
    sugar is sweet,
    your poems inviolate.

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  9. Sheilagh Lee16 May 2013 at 19:33

    such passion in this poem.

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  10. Reshma17 May 2013 at 16:23

    Isn't it strange how a blessed feeling like love makes us feel helpless at times? love this ode to love :)

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  11. Vandana Sharma18 May 2013 at 04:29

    so beautiful, waiting for love.....I think todays generation needs to learn this...

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  12. Belva Rae Staples24 May 2013 at 12:17

    You are a romantic, Robin. This is lovely.

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