Thursday, 28 May 2020
On my knees did bend
Respect your elders I was once taught
I laughed I was young and scared of nought
With fit young body and tongue that worked
I'd face the world nothing would be shirked
So turning aside from their wild minds
Chose my own path to make my own finds
Was it a gift or a penance won?
Were my feet now planted on he ground?
I know I met most beautiful of girls
With who I relished kissing her curls
Loved her so much wihout her I'd die
Mum said "Why is it you always sigh?"
There was no turning from my resolve
So told her whom I was now involved
Her eyes lit up, said "I know her mum!"
Just how would I know that they were chums
So this poem has a happy end
Usual ritual on my knees did bend
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I love how this comes full circle - and your personality shines through
ReplyDeleteAll in favour of happy endings. Congratulations.
ReplyDeletehappy endings indeed!
ReplyDeleteOh yes, happy endings are so important. As I grow older, looking back, I realize that I lived so fast that so much wasn't actually experienced. I reckon I should have gone slower.
ReplyDeleteMay we all have happy endings, Robin! Beautifully rendered 💝
ReplyDeleteThanks for the smile you just put on my face!
ReplyDeleteHappy endings are the best (and so necessary these days!). Thank you for this one, Robin. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteLove makes the world go round!
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful tale of love. Thank you for the smile today!
ReplyDeleteOne word ... YIPPEE.
ReplyDeletei love your love poems, O.G. so freewheeling and sweet. great write!
ReplyDeleteNice one Robin
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by my sumie Sunday
Much💖love
A lovely happy piece that is a delight to read. A breath of fresh air on a shelter-in-place day.
ReplyDelete"All's well that ends well." But for most we've enjoyed the journey. My mom used to tell me that I wouldn't find a nice in a bar though she knew I wasn't hanging out in bars. I doubt she'd ever been in one.
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Hurray for happy endings!
ReplyDeleteA positive piece of much needed verse
ReplyDeleteWell, who does not like a happy ending.Thanks for bringing smiles.
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