Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Memories



Once I was agile

But now my flaccid body

Is but a phantom

10 comments:

  1. pure fiction. Your mind is agile, brimming with the imagination as wild as a child's.

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  2. Great poem
    My grandfather had a naughty saying "you're only as old as you feel and when you stop looking and feeling your dead."LOL

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  3. Must be bleating week for Aussie poet blokes..you and Cosmo are going to be shipped off to boot camp at Kununurra to fire you up:)

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  4. Life is a walking memory and keep looking up!! This is the shortest three line fiction that you have written!!

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  5. Interesting read, no matter how you interpret it.

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  6. We are capable of more than we often give ourselves credit for.

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  7. Ah, Ha! So you have joined the club.

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