Friday 5 February 2021

Dum cuts it

                                 


Dum and Yum were now settled in village life, hunting, fishing and growing vegetables and harvesting fruit in season. Their hut housed all they needed placed on the floor or hung from the walls. They sat on the floor to eat, lay on it to sleep and the children played on it too. After a particularly wet period Yum could stand it no longer and slapped Dum on his arm and pointed to the mess. Dum knew what the problem was as the children played chasey round his legs

He nodded at Yum and went outside in the pouring rain with his axe and knife. Yum knew he could solve the problem or if not there would be one less inside the hut. The children wanted to go with him but she shook her head so they ran round in circles again.

Dum walked to the forest where the trees shade kept him dry and he had a think. He gathered and trimmed some branches to take home. Starting back the sky brightened up which would help.

Some village children were playing in the puddles and Yum now greeted him with a gentle caress, raising her eyebrows at his bits and pieces. She was going to say it doesn't matter any more but could see he was prepared to make something. 

He cut and shaped the pieces of wood then fixing them together until he had finished one piece. It was a three legged stool, not big enough for him or even for Yum but one child could sit on it. It was stable on its three legs so he showed it to Yum.

Yum suggested making more to sit on or keep things off the floor. She thought of other things too such as shelves on the walls! Dum looked shocked, far from coming up with an answer for a simple request for a seat for the children on a rainy day he had to make furniture now for the whole hut.


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10 comments:

  1. I look forward to reading about Dum and Yum, Robin – they brighten up my Sunday mornings! If only all men were as understanding as Dum.

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  2. The father's lament! Every problem solved mutates into a suite of other problems to solve.

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  3. I do love both the freshness and originality of your writing, Robin - in whatever form. It has such a good spirit about it too... Regards as ever Scott

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  4. I can never second-guess these characters (which makes them very interesting to me) and yet each stage of their development has a lovely inevitability.

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  5. The dawn of civilization...and poor Dum has to brave the rain in order to furnish the home.:) It's always lovely to read these installments of your story.

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  6. Dum's reaction, at the end, made me giggle. What was he expecting? A woman will always improve an existing idea, especially if it involves stuff to keep around the house, lol!

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  7. A nudge from the woman and things get creatively better. Nice episode Robin

    muchlove...

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  8. The old equivalent to ripping out a soft spot in a wall only to see that you have to do the whole wall--Dum is a good sport!

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  9. Getting stir crazy in the hut. I can't see a kid sitting on a stool for long!

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  10. Oh yes, you build a good thing and the well of want will open. Love this story. Looking forward to reading more.

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