Many years
ago I wrote a number of stories in serial form about the early inhabitants of
Long
ago a Maori man Pourangahua sailed by
boat to the
When it came time to return home, he asked Raukapanga if he could borrow two of his Toroa (or Albatross) that he kept as pets to help him take some kumara tubers home with him. Raukapanga was reluctant to loan his birds to Pourangahua because he loved them very much. Eventually he agreed but gave him instructions on how to care for them.
Pourangahua left with
the birds carrying of kumara as a gift from the chief. The chief had explained
to Pourangahua that once he reached the shore of his land Aotearoa, he would
have to get off the bird and continue his journey on foot and carry the kumara
himself. This is because the toroa much preferred flying over the sea as flying
over the land would tire them out.
Pourangahua was lazy
and made the birds fly all the way home over mountains and valleys to his village.
They had to fly so far the bird that had carried him was very tired. When they finally
were returned home the one who had had the most to carry flew slower than
normal and was attacked and killed by a huge evil spirit. Luckily the other
bird made it home safely, with tears rolling from his eyes as he lost his mate.
The Hawaiiki chief was
furious when he learned about his pet birds and so he sent a plague of
caterpillars to destroy the plants Pourangahua had planted from the kumara that
he’d had as a gift; so Pourangahua gained nothing from his visit to Hawaiki.
Pourangahua knew the plague had been sent to destroy his crop because he’d done wrong, so he would never be able return to Hawaiki again for he’d surely be killed for his cruelty to the Toroa.
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As the Stories were meant for children I normally gave an explanation by Mahika the storyteller what they should learn from the story. (Don't read if you are counting words!)
Mahuika said "Nowadays if you are lucky enough to see a toroa (albatross) up close you will see that it still sheds tears every time it eats food as it remembers its mate so now they keep their distance from man. They do not trust us anymore.”
The children all looked back up the in the sky searching for a long time to see if the birds were still there but by now they had gone.
I love it! Hope you will share some more of these stories. Were they ever published or performed in the past?
ReplyDeleteDefinitely not counting words... and agree with what Rosemary said- where can we read more such stories?
ReplyDeleteIn my labels bar there are all the subjects covered by my writing. Click on Mahuika (36) which indicates there are 36 stories about Mahuika.
DeleteHow wonderful to return to this series
ReplyDeleteeven from so long ago they know how to treat animals fairly.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed your re-telling of the legend.
Love this, Robin! I will be checking out the labels bar for more stories 💝
ReplyDeleteLove the way it ties into a close look at the end--an enchanting tale. I would definitely be watching for the tears.
ReplyDeleteWe, humans, are so good at the art of destruction and indirect self harm. I never understand people who don't only lack empathy for other creatures but they also lack the sense to understand that harming others ends up harming us. This tale is so sad. The fact that we've abused so many living things, and continue to do so, makes it even sadder.
ReplyDeleteI am sure this is a wonderful series. This one is a lesson to adults as well. Enjoyed the narration
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the read, and look forward to checking more of the stories. I love stories with a moral ... sort of like Aesop' fables. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your story Robin. Happy Sunday. Stay safe
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
I enjoy these little stories as a moral guide and as a fun read.
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