Thursday, 7 September 2017

We needed no words


I saw it in your eyes
That infinitesimal sign
The stirring of rapture
We met on the platform
Winter wind did nothing
To cool the ardor in us
It had been two long years
Nothing could stop us now
We needed no words

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10 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky7 September 2017 at 18:15

    No words needed, when a hug and kiss can say it all.

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  2. Anonymous7 September 2017 at 18:38

    Ah... hearts speak beyond words

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  3. Kim M. Russell7 September 2017 at 23:25

    There's something special about hellos and goodbyes at railway stations.We're all romantics at heart. :)

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  4. Sanaa Rizvi8 September 2017 at 02:01

    You write the best romantic poems ever, Robin!! Unforgettable write❤️

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  5. Jim8 September 2017 at 11:50

    Two years is a long, long time to be separated. My six months seemed an eternity. Of course that was before social media. You've done really good with these romantic poems, I have enjoyed reading them. Thank you,
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  6. brudberg8 September 2017 at 13:33

    Sometimes word means less than actions...

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade8 September 2017 at 19:52

    This is a small masterpiece, Robin!

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  8. Angie9 September 2017 at 08:04

    XOXO

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  9. Paul John Dear9 September 2017 at 09:31

    Some moments are beyond words.

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  10. Maude Lynn13 September 2017 at 12:50

    Well, this is just perfect!

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