The Last Kiss
My first piece with Sunday Scribblings was on October 3rd 2009 and only
my third ever post as a blogger. I had found a home and my first piece was
called “The First Kiss.”
This is my 204th offering to this prompt site and I am
reluctant and sad to let go.
So perhaps it is fitting to write a piece which echoes this sentiment.
The
Last Kiss
I received a phone message many
years ago not long after I became married that my grandmother; my father’s
mother had died.
So driving the few miles up to
her home where she had lived all my life I paid my last respects. She still lay
in the bed she used in the ground floor living room and her daughters were
there waiting for the undertaker.
We had when I was much younger
lived three doors down the street. When, at five I started school, World War 2
had started and thinking that I had learned enough on the first day I refused
to go on the second. So in order to get my older brother to school on time I
was dumped on “Granny” for the day. I think she was quite pleased as I know now
being a granddad myself many times over, forming a bond with a little one is a
privilege as well as a treat. It makes you feel younger and important again
even though lots of explaining is necessary; little fingers touch the creases
in your face and their games are often played with rules you had quite
forgotten.
So that was what I remembered as
I was taken to her bed by my aunts. My own long lost childhood came back yet I was
then unaware of having children or grandchildren of my own. I looked at her
peaceful face and automatically bent over to kiss her goodbye. I said goodbye
to a part of me and it was one more step in making me a complete person. I
turned and saw that both aunts were wiping away their tears.
I have returned to that street a
number of times. It draws me back like a sirens call to the land where the
building blocks that made me were put together.
A sweet kiss to Sunday Scribblings
A nostalgic journey back in time. It's so touching. I can imagine your sentiments this being your 204th and reluctantly a last one. A wonderful write oldegg!
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Another lovely memory - thanks for sharing these. Our lives are shaped as much by good-bye as hello.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this beautiful memory. I felt as if I knew her a little, just from your description here.
ReplyDeleteThe past often doesn't feel so far away..memories seem to merge become both clearer and faded..our history..it is sad to see Sunday Scribblings go..am right with you on that one
ReplyDeleteYes,they are the building blocks that make us. Sweet and suitable farewell poem.
ReplyDeletelovely sharing
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much love...
You capture the bittersweet feeling so well!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHappy Holidays!
Perfect, your entry and exit kiss pieces. My first piece was February 15, 2008. And I did the First Kiss one as well, which was cool because it was the one Laini judged, the prize being a copy of her “Lips Touch: Three Times.” There were hundreds of participants back then, remember? Oh what a great ride! So yes, perfectly suited is this farewell to your grandmother: all that she gave and means, all that she is, in the form of you, now.
ReplyDeletegrandparents are the great mystery.... and yes, sunday scribes is a great site..!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt's a new year, and Sunday Scribblings 2 is a new place for prompts for writers of whatever genre. I was sorry to see Sunday Scribblings go, so I decided to continue the tradition. Each Wednesday, I will post a new prompt. At midnight Friday, you will be able to link your writing to this site: Sunday Scribblings 2
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After a very long absence, I went to Sunday Scribblings looking for inspiration, only to discover it was all over with ages ago. I scrolled down to the list of final entries and found this one. It's a lovely piece and expresses the goodbye so well. I'm sad it ended, and sadder to have missed so much.
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