Wednesday, August 14, 2013

The Cheat



His Story:

Need my regular

I am so late home again

She may be asleep

 

Her Story:

I am so distraught

He is a habitual liar

I’ll regulate him

 

Police report:

Just the usual

Body found, wife is distraught

Domestic gone wrong

10 comments:

  1. These types of things rarely end well. I just hope it wasn't all a big misunderstanding.

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  2. Change of style. Nothing 'twee' about that. Gritty, with approval all round.

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  3. Wow! I sure didn't see that one coming! Great use of the prompts.

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  4. Oh dear...another one of oldegg's tales of domestic bliss.
    " Life amongst the benign lettuces":)

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  5. The never-ending story where both parties lose! Nicely Robin!

    Hank

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  6. A crime story with a mystery!! A change but absolutely a gritty urban life!!

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  7. oh dear what an awful story. too bad it often happens. Well done oldegg

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  8. Taut, suspensefully, and all too real. Loved your style on this one, with the headings on each stanza. Crisp! Amy

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