Wednesday, 14 August 2013

The Cheat



His Story:

Need my regular

I am so late home again

She may be asleep

 

Her Story:

I am so distraught

He is a habitual liar

I’ll regulate him

 

Police report:

Just the usual

Body found, wife is distraught

Domestic gone wrong

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10 comments:

  1. Ann (bunnygirl)14 August 2013 at 20:55

    These types of things rarely end well. I just hope it wasn't all a big misunderstanding.

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  2. Altonian15 August 2013 at 01:41

    Change of style. Nothing 'twee' about that. Gritty, with approval all round.

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  3. susan15 August 2013 at 05:33

    Wow! I sure didn't see that one coming! Great use of the prompts.

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  4. rallentanda15 August 2013 at 06:38

    Oh dear...another one of oldegg's tales of domestic bliss.
    " Life amongst the benign lettuces":)

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  5. kaykuala15 August 2013 at 07:31

    The never-ending story where both parties lose! Nicely Robin!

    Hank

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  6. Nanka15 August 2013 at 09:13

    A crime story with a mystery!! A change but absolutely a gritty urban life!!

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  7. Sheilagh Lee15 August 2013 at 12:43

    oh dear what an awful story. too bad it often happens. Well done oldegg

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  8. J Cosmo Newbery16 August 2013 at 04:17

    Oh dear...

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  9. Laurie Kolp16 August 2013 at 10:19

    Tragic.

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  10. Sharp Little Pencil17 August 2013 at 17:41

    Taut, suspensefully, and all too real. Loved your style on this one, with the headings on each stanza. Crisp! Amy

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