rather a sad one. I suppose we have all felt it at one time or another.
I think of one particular relationship which ended abruptly. I screwed up, let jealousy get the better of me. He committed suicide, though not because of me. It's simply one of those tragedies.
Good luck with that one :)
Great poeming this morning! It rolls when read aloud.
Your poem, though wistful and sad, rolls along in a comforting way!
Love unreturned is a hard experience. Your words remind me that many times we speak to comfort our own wounds. To soothe the pain, and heal the hurt.Elizabeth
A very poignant poem!
Old egg, nicely done with the end rhyme. Reads with fluidity.Pamela
What degree of affection do you needHow long must my poor heart bleed?What vision splendid it would beA rekindled love for you and meThis makes one feel so young. There is a feeling of tenderness and hope! Nicely Robin!Hank
Your words have touched a nerve in everyone who reads this. We have all been hurt at some point. Beautiful poem.
This really is a poem for everyone.
A heartfelt spin with the words.
Your emotional plea works fine, and hope it ignites that spark in her too, after all it has taken so many years!!
"Were you that star in darkest space?"What a haunting question! It's still haunting me as I wind down this reading of your poem. It's a very fine line, as well as a very haunting question!
Thanks for your visit to my continuing story...I've not posted this weeks yet... trying to catch up a tad first. Trolls aren't the only thing that's trick...apparently so is lost love. I think though that changing oneself for someone else isn't the way to go. Acceptance and compromise if those two things aren't in place a relationship doesn't seem to be on steady ground. Well done, I enjoyed your verse.