Together forever... :)
You express as a true romanticist!! I am back after a break of over a year and amazing to see you continue in your artistic and romantic tradition!!
A touching tale of true love.
The last line shows such strength and wisdom..and a truth that can never be disconnected..
Sadness and connection to soften its blow. This is a beautiful gentle write.
You are a wise man, old egg. Nice write.Pamela
Some bonds simply cannot be broken. Makes it hard for the one left behind, but the bond continues. Your words ring with that truth,Elizabeth
Aw, so sad and sorrowful, kind of like a Gorecki symphony. :)
"As times sad sand runs", so beautiful. Such a delicate song of love. I believe in the bells that ring forever and I think that you will always merge as "one". I've been dwelling on thoughts of loyalty and love lately(thanks for reading)and enjoying the idea of its endlessness.
It's comforting to know that death cannot destroy love.
There's nothing like a love poem to start my day. Thank you.
Robin, I love when you let your romantic side shine through. The ending, about unity, is hopeful, strong, beautiful. Peace, Amy
Like two people standing on either side of a river - still in love but no longer able to touch.