There's truth in your words, OE. Concise work always impresses me. Well wordled!
Very well done! Like a velvet hammer, it packs a soft, powerful punch.
It's a hard life, dependent on the land, but with the same needs as someone a step or two removed..
Concise, precise - good wordling.
Now that is some bad luck! Thanks for visiting at my blog and your comments!
Bad luck all around. Inspired poem, OE. You used the wordle words well!
Old Egg, nice to see how you made such a concise piece with a story. Well done.Pamela
Ha ha, very clever. Just two words each line. Good work.
Nice, good stories and poems as usual. Read every one of your posts now...Thanks,RupertGeorge
The use of few words mirror the last line perfectly.
Powerful piece. The brevity of it amazes me.
fossicking? Off I go to check the dictionary. Wait, it's like this whole thing is a definition.
There's truth in your words, OE. Concise work always impresses me. Well wordled!
ReplyDeleteVery well done! Like a velvet hammer, it packs a soft, powerful punch.
ReplyDeleteIt's a hard life, dependent on the land, but with the same needs as someone a step or two removed..
ReplyDeleteConcise, precise - good wordling.
ReplyDeleteNow that is some bad luck! Thanks for visiting at my blog and your comments!
ReplyDeleteBad luck all around. Inspired poem, OE. You used the wordle words well!
ReplyDeleteOld Egg, nice to see how you made such a concise piece with a story. Well done.
ReplyDeletePamela
Ha ha, very clever. Just two words each line. Good work.
ReplyDeleteNice, good stories and poems as usual. Read every one of your posts now...
ReplyDeleteThanks,
RupertGeorge
The use of few words mirror the last line perfectly.
ReplyDeletePowerful piece. The brevity of it amazes me.
ReplyDeletefossicking? Off I go to check the dictionary.
ReplyDeleteWait, it's like this whole thing is a definition.