Hoku and Aotea (82)
The
continuing story of Ahu and Ahuahu her husband in a Maori village in Aotearoa
before European settlement of New
Zealand. (Did you miss last weeks episode? Click on Ahu in
the labels bar for previous posts or click on 'RÅ«aimoko asks to meet Ahuahu (No. 81)' in the Blog Archive.
Hoku settled down quite well living with Ahu
and Hatiti. She was glad that Ahuahu was the headman at Black Sands so that she
would knew what was happening in the village from the talk at mealtimes. What
she particularly liked was how she and the Ahuahu’s children were free to do
there own thing in the village and were not observed and criticised for
anything that would appear not fitting for a chief’s child which so different
from her life at Rocky Outcrop.
The first time she had been taken up to the Hot Springs to see where
Horowai and Tangaroa lived she was horrified at the appalling smell of suphur
and the sight of the bubbling pools. Gradually she got used to it and visited
Horowai often when Tangaroa was fishing.
However at Ahuahu’s home she was closest in
age to Hekehoru and she spent much of her time with her and they both used to
see Tui the old chief’s son together much to Tui’s annoyance who wanted
Hekehoru all to himself. Hoku had hardly spoken to Aotea who had virtually
ignored her. One day when he returned home Hoku was sitting on the porch and he
had to walk past her to go inside.
“Is anyone else at home?” he asked.
She shook her head, then said, “Why do you
not like me Aotea?”
He paused then sat down beside her, “That is
not the case, Hoku. It is just that there has been so much talk of us being the
same age and of your own father saying you were of marriageable age, that I did
not want to be forced to like you when I don’t know you.”
Hoku pouted and said “I am my father’s
favourite daughter. He wants me to marry well. He trusts your father Ahuahu and
said if anything happened to him Ahuahu might want his son to marry me. You are
only the son by Ahu he has left.”
“No, that is not right, Rauora is his son by Hatiti as well but
of course he is younger than either of us. My father has not told me to
look after you or take you fishing and neither will he. If you like me you will
show it and if I like you, you will know it too.” He paused and looked at Hoku
closely. “Hoku you have been brought up differently to my brothers and sisters.
My parents do not say ‘let us hope they will like each other’ we are free to
make up our own minds. There will be many men that will look on you and want
you to be their wife. My parents do not believe in arranged marriages.”
Hoku looked at Aotea again and said “If only
my parents would subscribe to that idea.” She paused then looked up at Aotea “Why
have you not asked me to go fishing? Tangaroa has. I like Tangaroa, he is
strong like his father and Horowai treats me like a sister.”
Aotea then explained to her that Horowai was
Hatiti’s first daughter by her first husband. “Ahu and Ahuahu came from Gannet Island
but left when Rocky Outcrop kept threatening the village. They came here and as
they both worked so hard and were wise in solving problems with our neighbours they
are well respected and Ahuahu has been head man for some years now. Tell me
about your family, Hoku “
“Our family has always been in the village; being
chief has either been passed down from father to son or from brother to
brother. The stories that are told are those of our village controlling a large
area around us. Only when the pakeha arrived has life been more precarious.”
While Hoku was talking, Aotea placed his hand
gently over hers and she appeared not to notice.
“Why do the pakeha leave your village alone,
Aotea?” She asked.
“There is nothing here that they want. The
fishing is difficult from the lava sands of the beach, there is no safe
anchorage for their large boats and the
hot springs are just a novelty for them and there is nothing to be traded. Most importantly my father tries to deal fairly with the pakeha when they
visit and they realize this.”
“And why did you place your hand on mine,
Aotea. My father would be cross if he knew.”
“It is to show you that we can be friends
Hoku and I do not want to fight with you.” Aotea paused then continued, “If I
had approached you earlier before you had seen our family living together you
would have been offended. I want us to be friends not because others say we
should but because we find it easy to smile at one another. We have lived
different lives up to now and after you being with us just a little while I now
want you to stay longer.”
“Should we walk on the beach together this
evening?”
“Yes, but I expect we will have to take
Houhia and Rauora with us.”
With that they saw Ahu returning to the whare
so Aotea let go of Hoku’s hand but Ahu noticed how close they were sitting
together and smiled to herself but said nothing.
I like the end sentence..as many of your endings it leaves me feeling there is a sense of satisfaction and achievement..
ReplyDeleteThe simple beauty of a relationship beginning, I love the depth you give to all the characters in your story and how well you tie them all together! Your dialog always feels very real, as if we have truly overheard them speaking. Nice to see you back here with another edition. :-)
ReplyDeletethanks for the visit to Old Grizz. I admire this story and the fact that you stay with it. Are you going to publish it as a book?
ReplyDeleteI'm with Grizz, Robin. Your story, for all its turns and multiple characters with similar names, is remarkably cohesive and charming. I could see it with simple pen-and-ink artwork... Amy
ReplyDeletehttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/01/27/extra-extra-editorial-comment-by-moi/
Old Grizz, and Amy are right; and I have said it before, this should be a book. Every time I read one of your episodes I get visions of the settings that could have been painted by Gauguin. He worked in a different part of the world, but the people, and feelings are very similar.
ReplyDeleteHe handled the nuances of that encounter remarkably well. But then, I've come to expect that kind of maturity and levelheadedness from his family.
ReplyDeletevery cool...enjoyed the change up from the story of yours i have been reading....i love human interaction and study it so i really appreciate this and felt like i was right there watching them...the end of this installment is def a cool moment...
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