Has Tangaroa started fishing again? (No. 73)
The
continuing story of Ahu and Ahuahu her husband in a Maori village in Aotearoa
before European settlement of New
Zealand. (Missed an episode? Click on Ahu in
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Hinewai returned
to help the priest speak to the village council again. When she called in on
Ahuahu to check if the pakeha had arrived he merely shrugged his shoulders and
shook his head. Hatiti came up to Hinewai and hugged her. “You are going to
look after the young pakeha priest again, are you, Hinewai?”
“Shush!” Hinewai
whispered, “Come let us go outside and talk.” So the two sisters walked
together down by the trees and then sat down on the ground. Even though they
were older now Hatiti still started to fuss over Hinewai and to smooth her hair
and push the wisps away from her face just as she used to as a teenager.
Hinewai just sat and enjoyed the attention then said “Has Tangaroa started
fishing again.”
Hatiti laughed
outright. “Do you mean have they finally stopped making love? I know let’s go
and find out.”
“You have seen
them though?”
Hatiti nodded “Horowai
came down the other day, looking very pleased with herself. Come on let’s walk
up there, Ahuahu will send one of the children if the Pakeha priest comes. I
wonder whether Rauoro wants to come as well to see his sister?”
Hinewai shook her
head, laughing, “Not if she is going to talk to us about Tangaroa.”
“She wouldn’t
would she?”
“She might to me,”
replied Hinewai.
“Hinewai, what did
you teach her?”
At this Hinewai
just smiled “She just asked me about men, so I told her.”
As they walked up
to the Hot Springs,
Hatiti sighed “I loved Kaihutu my first husband but he wasn’t at all like Ahuahu.”
“You never have
talked about either of them with me before. Can you now?”
Hatiti thought for
a moment. “No, every moment with Ahuahu is precious for me but I cannot even
share those thoughts with Ahu, but he is a good and loving husband.” She paused
then said “I wanted you to be happy too, Hinewai. Time is passing and one
should never leave unsaid what should be said. Are you happier now?”
“I am not sure
about that. I don’t really want to talk about my past. Luckily you do not ask.
You just love me like the older sister you have always been. If I do mention
something about my other life you do not judge me and probably keep silent and do not tell
anyone else. When Torangi and I were sent away from Black Sands I was both very
angry and unbelievably sad. But now I just want to return here and thanks to
Ahuahu I can. I still feel this is my home but Torangi is not sure. But there,
I have always been talked about, and I can accept that. He is happy in the
forest with Hauku. But I feel I can atone for the past here but not there.”
“Would he release
you from the marriage?”
With that Hinewai
smiled “I am not tied, Hatiti. Torangi and I had no formal wedding. I have not been tied since my first dreadful
marriage. That man would have killed me in the end.”
“What were the
gods thinking, Hinewai? I should have married him but for that tidal wave after
the earthquake. What was his name, Tui wasn’t it?” She paused then said “It is
strange, I think Paikea’s brother Tui, the old chief’s second son is looking at
Hekehoru now. We will have to watch him.”
Hinewai nodded “I
stole that other sadistic Tui from you all those years ago and found that I
had married a killer whale but his parents just didn’t care.”
As they walked
into the Hot Springs
settlement they were both holding hands.
Horowai ran up to
them smiling. “I am so glad you have both come to see me but Tangaroa has just
gone fishing.” Immediately both Hatiti and Hinewai burst out laughing.
“Why are you
laughing?”
“Let’s go in
inside, we will tell you.” Hatiti said as the both hugged Horowai and rubbed
noses with her.
So the honeymoon is over! Well, they do need to eat sometime.
ReplyDeleteI like this interpretation of silence..makes it seem more fun somehow..
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your story! I will have to go back to catch up on earlier episodes!
ReplyDeleteI was somewhat lost on this because I don't know the backstory or what has preceded this scene. But I liked the details. I assume you are familiar with Maori customs and history. I know a little, but not enough to call you on anything.
ReplyDeleteI am writing a novel based on my experiences living in Brazil, but it takes place in a fictitious country, because I want to be able to fabricate things that might not resemble the real Brazilian culture.
My response to the SILENCE prompt can be found here: http://proartz.blogspot.com/2012/11/the-summer-of-1974-short-fiction.html (an excerpt from a different in-progress novel than the one I mentioned above.)
So they came up for air just in time for company. Probably got hungry.
ReplyDeleteWhat a difference time and experience has made for both sisters.
Ahh, the talk of women.. of husbands, love and sadness. Something time has never changed. Your writing is so true to life Old Egg, you know human nature well!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this read by itself and now will go back to catch up
ReplyDeleteThe last line was the kicker, Robin. Signal that honeymoon is ended. I just hope that poor girl can walk! Keep 'em coming, Robin. I'm in love with your AlterWorld.
ReplyDeleteAmy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/11/19/bitter-silence/
Very interesting, the happenings unfolded in Hinewai’s and Hatiti’s conversation in this episode. Of course I’m very curious to know what will come of Father John’s ill-timed visit to Black Sands, what with Hinewai’s cheek in addressing him as she did in Episode 72. Oh and poor Haeata! I caught up with Episode 71, too, and I feel so bad for her, a teenager having to marry a much older man… But! You know I will be watching Tangaroa to see if he fancies adding her to his collection of one!
ReplyDeleteReally enjoy playing catch up to the story. I love how you are very gently (but, firmly) introducing the priest and religious bit each chapter. Such a shame their way of life had to all end so badly.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed these.
I love the interaction of the women in this episode. It's a wonderful well written saga.
ReplyDeleteSomeone got hungry! No, we should never put off speaking our heart to our loved ones.
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