Wednesday, 26 September 2012

Love at first sight

It’s love at first sight
So please give me chance
Your eyes entice me

Never in my dreams
Did I expect that sweet smile
My heart burst with joy

I savor your kisses
You nod and our fingers link
We become as one

As zephyr winds blow
Flowers blossom in my heart
You are my true love


  1. love at first sight is so perfectly described here.Bravo

  2. This is such a romantic serenade.

  3. That last stanza is especially good. Very nice.

  4. I don't think I've ever experienced love at first sight, but you make it sound delicious!

  5. I am sorry to hear that Bunnygirl. I have experienced it many times over the last 70 years. Luckily much of that time my wife was able to keep me on the straight and narrow.

  6. Zephyr winds are beautifully gentle..yet determined..I love the sound..and the feeling..Jae

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  8. You are a bit of a devil oldegg. A hard dog to keep on the porch I would say:)

  9. How beautiful, love at first sight becoming true love. I like the romantic mood and the flowering image in the heart.

  10. A love letter to the maX. Egg.

  11. Oh, yes, I know love at first sight. Mine was a bit different though. But I knew it for what it was...I'm just glad I didn't kill him at that first meeting when I accidentally hit him with my car. Who'd of thought all the happy years that came after :-)

    Very nice poem. Thank you.

  12. touching and sweet. you make a lovely case for love at first sight.