Those early days of love are such treasures to remember!
As you pointed out in your comment to me, there are some amazing similarities between our writings today. I always marvel when things like that happen!
Well written romantic take on the prompt--this brought out good feelings!
Honestly, it is just beautiful! Reply@Oldegg ~ Thank you so much for that suggestion! :) I'll replace it asap! :) I was searching for a word that would suit the complete meaning of this haiku and you've suggested the perfect one! :) Thank you! :)
Robin, I'm melting, simply melting under the spell of this poem. You are a true romantic! Lovely use of the words, as well... Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/08/22/diva-heart-in-denial-whirl-trifecta/
I like the end line - our love is secure. All that passion, the love isn't fleeting, it is solid. Great. :)
Secure is good..constant..consistent..always there..fine words..jae
Aw tantalizing first love where passion rules. beautifully done
Your heart is obviously harbouring great feelings of love, which must be expressed. Lucky you!
I love the last two lines.
Loved the end lines...Meditating for being one with you
ahhhh....but to be enticed by "lips that tempt and amuse." there's a bit of steaminess in this piece. very nice!
Isn't love grand? I love this piece and hope it applies to your present state of being!
Awww, the sacred pleasure of devotion given to the old soul who experiences everlasting love. Precious!
Security, especially a love secure, isn't that what we all really want?Very nice. Thank you.