Wednesday, August 8, 2012

First Date

I love your brown skin
Those lips so ready to kiss
You touch, I crumble

Now on our first date
I'm not uneasy anymore
drawn to your dark eyes

22 comments:

  1. O. nothing is more lovely than a man slowly falling in love and you have captured that feeling OE.

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  2. A spare, brief poem, but saying it all.

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  3. you have captured the start of love perfectly

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  4. simple but very evocative. Great use of words to craft those deep emotions of first love :)

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  5. I remember crumbling at his touch....a lovely piece...

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  6. Very nice. I am, enchanted.
    Thank you.

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  7. There's something intoxicating about a relationship's beginnings. Nice.

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  8. Robin, a lovely departure from your storytelling, and first rate in both images and feelings. You are a hopeless (hopeful?) romantic, and I love you for it!
    Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/08/07/rocket-ship-to-the-sun-trifecta/

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  9. beautiful *sigh* I'd still be nervous ;)

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  10. Thank you for letting me know about the spamers.
    Also motly thank you for stopping by.
    I love your first date.
    You have capture on many truly feel on there first date.
    Blessings

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  11. really beautiful. I love your transformation from the first to the second.

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  12. I like it! The trick, of course, is to maintain this feeling through the years--but the initial rush of love is one of life's great pleasures. Thanks for taking me back.

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  13. Ah, Robin...the eyes can really draw another in, can't they? Nicely captured feeling in so few lines.

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  14. S'pose that cuts all of the blue eyed girls out.

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  15. Beautiful and I love it. Brings back sweet memories :-)

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  16. Lovely reflections of new love growing. How fragile and precious!

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  17. The comfort of true love. Unique and pretty. :)

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