Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Just when things could get no better

I loved you for so long 
And now it’s all a bloody mess 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

I loved that kinky smile 
As we met in secret and you held me tight 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

I loved that tender kiss of yours 
And the scent of your auburn hair 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

We never made any plans 
There was no need for that 
When every word was 
A tender loving touch 

How was it that your man 
Found out and wrote my wife a letter? 
I will miss you though 
Will you too?

17 comments:

  1. Oh darn!
    Those secrets are so hard to keep. Nicely parsed prose-poem.

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  2. Better to be too careful than not careful enough...

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  3. Phew, the cynic in me would say: Dream on, forget her, she wrote the letter!

    Well recalled!

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  4. Exactly my thought, of course she wrote the letter seeing that the consistent thought was whether or not she would miss him too.

    It's wild how the half can easily destroy the whole.

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  5. I'm sitting here cracking up. He got his just due! Well done!

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  6. A kinky smile in secret... they were bound to get caught. Love it!

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  7. Hilarious. LOL.Snoopy husbands..bloody menace..no one is allowed to have any fun these days:)

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  8. Now you just jolly well leave the auburn heads alone - they were MY prerogative!

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  9. Oh the enticing secrets of love, they are often more beautiful when crystallised in time and never disturbed.

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  10. Ouch..bloody women armed with pens..at least for a small moment it could get no better..Jae

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  11. Those kinky smiles are bound to bring you to ruin! This is a cute piece!

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  12. She didn't write the letter in my opinion...otherwise, why meet, why a kinky little smile and tender moments? Sounds like he just wants to hear again that she will miss him, too. Still, must not have been good enough to break up either marriage, both of which are obviously in trouble. Seems that one of the marriages should have finally seen the light of day and cracked open. Interesting that both held on.

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  13. my my, hope this is just a tall tale - I'd have never thought lol!

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  14. That's what makes an affair a house of cards.

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  15. ooh naughty secrets.People always think they will never get caught silly people.

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  16. Ahh, the complications and betrayls of secret loves. Been there, done that!

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