Wednesday, 25 April 2012

Just when things could get no better

I loved you for so long 
And now it’s all a bloody mess 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

I loved that kinky smile 
As we met in secret and you held me tight 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

I loved that tender kiss of yours 
And the scent of your auburn hair 
I will miss you though 
Will you too? 

We never made any plans 
There was no need for that 
When every word was 
A tender loving touch 

How was it that your man 
Found out and wrote my wife a letter? 
I will miss you though 
Will you too?
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17 comments:

  1. Unknown25 April 2012 at 14:54

    Oh darn!
    Those secrets are so hard to keep. Nicely parsed prose-poem.

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  2. Ann (bunnygirl)25 April 2012 at 16:27

    Better to be too careful than not careful enough...

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  3. Andy Sewina25 April 2012 at 16:32

    Phew, the cynic in me would say: Dream on, forget her, she wrote the letter!

    Well recalled!

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  4. Archna Sharma25 April 2012 at 17:33

    Exactly my thought, of course she wrote the letter seeing that the consistent thought was whether or not she would miss him too.

    It's wild how the half can easily destroy the whole.

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  5. Linda Jacobs25 April 2012 at 18:03

    I'm sitting here cracking up. He got his just due! Well done!

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  6. Laurie Kolp25 April 2012 at 19:02

    A kinky smile in secret... they were bound to get caught. Love it!

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  7. rallentanda25 April 2012 at 19:06

    Hilarious. LOL.Snoopy husbands..bloody menace..no one is allowed to have any fun these days:)

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  8. Altonian25 April 2012 at 22:53

    Now you just jolly well leave the auburn heads alone - they were MY prerogative!

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  9. Unknown26 April 2012 at 02:39

    Oh the enticing secrets of love, they are often more beautiful when crystallised in time and never disturbed.

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  10. Jae Rose26 April 2012 at 07:23

    Ouch..bloody women armed with pens..at least for a small moment it could get no better..Jae

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  11. Belva Rae Staples26 April 2012 at 19:28

    Those kinky smiles are bound to bring you to ruin! This is a cute piece!

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  12. Di Eats the Elephant27 April 2012 at 03:51

    She didn't write the letter in my opinion...otherwise, why meet, why a kinky little smile and tender moments? Sounds like he just wants to hear again that she will miss him, too. Still, must not have been good enough to break up either marriage, both of which are obviously in trouble. Seems that one of the marriages should have finally seen the light of day and cracked open. Interesting that both held on.

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  13. Larry27 April 2012 at 08:26

    nice...

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  14. Dee Martin27 April 2012 at 21:01

    my my, hope this is just a tall tale - I'd have never thought lol!

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  15. Alice Audrey28 April 2012 at 13:00

    That's what makes an affair a house of cards.

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  16. Sheilagh Lee30 April 2012 at 10:22

    ooh naughty secrets.People always think they will never get caught silly people.

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  17. Josie Two Shoes16 June 2012 at 21:02

    Ahh, the complications and betrayls of secret loves. Been there, done that!

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