Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Young Love

We were wed early
and in our amateur love
kindled another

You diligent were
with the fruit of our love
supporting us all

and the spring of life
as we nurtured our baby
bound us together

9 comments:

  1. And that is what family is all about.

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  2. Ah...brings back some beautiful memories. I love the poem.

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  3. This is lovely oldegg. I wish you would write more poetry!

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  4. This is clear and quite brilliant OldEgg..whittled back to all that really matters..in word..and thought..Jae

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  5. This poem is beautiful in its simplicity. Like a white cotton dress on a baby girl.

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  6. You have painted a picture of a loving family in very few words. It is touching, tender, and beautiful!

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  7. a really sweet poem and well-crafted use of the writing prompts

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  8. Love the continuity in this set, and the way you made it read so simply, your genius baffles the casual reader. Very nicely done!!!

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