Wednesday, 21 March 2012

Young Love

We were wed early
and in our amateur love
kindled another

You diligent were
with the fruit of our love
supporting us all

and the spring of life
as we nurtured our baby
bound us together
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9 comments:

  1. Alice Audrey21 March 2012 at 14:52

    And that is what family is all about.

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  2. Lilibeth21 March 2012 at 17:56

    Ah...brings back some beautiful memories. I love the poem.

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  3. rallentanda21 March 2012 at 19:42

    This is lovely oldegg. I wish you would write more poetry!

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  4. Jae Rose22 March 2012 at 11:14

    This is clear and quite brilliant OldEgg..whittled back to all that really matters..in word..and thought..Jae

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  5. Unknown24 March 2012 at 11:19

    This poem is beautiful in its simplicity. Like a white cotton dress on a baby girl.

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  6. Belva Rae Staples24 March 2012 at 12:16

    You have painted a picture of a loving family in very few words. It is touching, tender, and beautiful!

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  7. Sheilagh Lee25 March 2012 at 18:03

    truly beautiful

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  8. beeguiler26 March 2012 at 17:38

    a really sweet poem and well-crafted use of the writing prompts

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  9. Andy Sewina28 March 2012 at 02:21

    Love the continuity in this set, and the way you made it read so simply, your genius baffles the casual reader. Very nicely done!!!

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