It is one of
those days
awake early once again
I struggle to get
up
It is barely dawn
and it feels cold
Reluctantly I
draw the curtains
and when I do I
see
the trees swathed
in a lifting fog
and silence all
around
It was so
beautiful it seemed as though
I had caught the
day slowly revealing
her enticing
secrets
with but me to
observe her
I quickly dressed
and hurried from
my door and
walked briskly to
the village pond
as the cold misty
morning lingered still.
My breath puffing
clouds
as I carefully made
my way
to the edge of
the water
where the birds
too paddled
Slowly I squatted
down on my haunches
to be less
conspicuous and quite still
scarcely breathed
as I too
became at one with
the scene.
As they searched
for food they were
lenient with me
and paid me little account
as scarcely a
quack or a chirp told
of my presence on
those still waters.
Brightening now
as the sun struggled
to burn away the
ponds shroud
I felt
exhilarated that I was too
Part of nature’s dawn.
I am breathing more deeply after reading this. It reminds me of Robert Frost, whose words I could not live without. If we are willing to observe with our still hearts, there is that moment that she will allow; I love the wink that she shares with you here.
ReplyDeleteHappy Summer Solstice!
to become one with nature if only for a morning must have left you walking with clouds...nice write.
ReplyDeleteLovely to be a part of nature's dawn.
ReplyDeleteAnd here I was thinking the ducks stressed you out too.
ReplyDeleteA lovely way to spend early morning
ReplyDelete(for some:)in winter. You had me worried there for a moment whey you got down on your haunches.
What a beautiful scene to be a part of..seems like an English duck pond to me..i wonder if it was part of your recent travels..Jae
ReplyDeleteThere is definitely something magical about being out in nature in the early morning. What a lovely experience to have for the asking!
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem. You really captured the moment, hushed birds and all.
ReplyDeleteReading this makes me feel hushed and in the fog...a great poem.
ReplyDeleteI like the slow unveiling of the morning, as though she knows that you are watching her put her clothes on and that she likes that little bit of voyeurism.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
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What a lovely scenario you paint with words! I could feel the shrouded stillness and your small place there among the creatures, all welcoming the start of a new day! Beautifully written Old Egg!
ReplyDeleteLove those moments when it's just me and the waking world, when creatures are more tolerant of our presence as they are also sleepily beginning their day.
ReplyDeleteOh my glop! With all the darkness in the stories, catching up with and Altonian...I'm so glad to find at least here life is as it should be! Whew, I needed this one.
ReplyDeleteThank you,
Kwee