tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post6272408913964614253..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Ahu and Moana visit Hauku (No 43)Old Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-89204823909304089762012-03-17T15:57:31.311-07:002012-03-17T15:57:31.311-07:00I like the way you have tied this together. I am g...I like the way you have tied this together. I am glad the young girl went to visit with her mother and didn't decide to be an inconsiderate little beast.Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-7347015326483537602012-03-14T19:07:48.885-07:002012-03-14T19:07:48.885-07:00I did not see that coming at all. Frankly, it'...I did not see that coming at all. Frankly, it's a rather pleasant twist to the story. I'm so glad Torangi found a better woman.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-85896426297854596632012-03-12T12:29:27.149-07:002012-03-12T12:29:27.149-07:00Clearly, there is a sense of investment here, I ag...Clearly, there is a sense of investment here, I agree with Altonian. I wonder if these are simple scribbles that you are presenting or personal coursework or a step toward established print. Anyway, it is becoming very complete.<br /><br />I'm happy that hope was present for everyone in this episode.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-23879885707702361062012-03-12T12:26:31.907-07:002012-03-12T12:26:31.907-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-47870945528059410382012-03-11T15:22:34.514-07:002012-03-11T15:22:34.514-07:00Dropping by in the middle of the story, I loved th...Dropping by in the middle of the story, I loved the interaction and the side stories that unfolding. You develop your characters and plot so well that it holds us!Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-2944192056510751762012-03-11T08:12:24.712-07:002012-03-11T08:12:24.712-07:00An interesting turn of events. I suppose on a rela...An interesting turn of events. I suppose on a relatively small island, though, relationships could easily become complicated like this.Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-15810793561387143822012-03-11T05:44:25.733-07:002012-03-11T05:44:25.733-07:00Almost like a homecoming..were the past hurts are ...Almost like a homecoming..were the past hurts are comforted..and the old and familiar becomes welcome..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-46235281700924783792012-03-11T05:00:58.878-07:002012-03-11T05:00:58.878-07:00That's a nice development. The sudden bringin...That's a nice development. The sudden bringing together of elements from different parts of the whole story, and in such a natural manner, shows that this truly is a novel, and not just a linking series of short stories. I like this very much, and would like to see it as a book (hard-back, of course).<br /><br />It's done it again. fivid, and amedur, plain as day, but not accepted!!Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.com