tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post5896750739705729380..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: I remember youOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-83154865069371779742017-01-12T14:42:59.278-08:002017-01-12T14:42:59.278-08:00Beautiful, Robin. I love the way you tie together ...Beautiful, Robin. I love the way you tie together the relationship and the tide. And aren't so many relationships like that? One wants to ask how much of this is based in real experience and how much in your creativity. But ---- I won't ask.Sandra Connerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17879983044958994786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-18828207435142336912017-01-11T22:42:20.633-08:002017-01-11T22:42:20.633-08:00Shh Sumana! I did meet a Pallavi and thought she d...Shh Sumana! I did meet a Pallavi and thought she deserved a poem.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-21723755446790782242017-01-11T20:41:12.692-08:002017-01-11T20:41:12.692-08:00hey, 'Pallavi' sounds so Indian, specially...hey, 'Pallavi' sounds so Indian, specially with long black hair :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-21692887450149680652017-01-11T19:56:22.811-08:002017-01-11T19:56:22.811-08:00A last good-bye...A last good-bye...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-68649043723388483362017-01-11T19:32:13.668-08:002017-01-11T19:32:13.668-08:00I can see the tears in her eyes.........sounds lik...I can see the tears in her eyes.........sounds like she was marrying out of duty, poor girl.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-5849053302863621122017-01-11T15:01:07.780-08:002017-01-11T15:01:07.780-08:00Sad ending. Makes me wonder if that marriage will...Sad ending. Makes me wonder if that marriage will have a sad ending too.<br />I agree with J Cosmo Newbery - so many questions here. Nice writing.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-70198146796516807702017-01-10T08:12:56.995-08:002017-01-10T08:12:56.995-08:00Summer love beautifully described to be a metaphor...Summer love beautifully described to be a metaphor for love as a whole. I hope the memories of the perfect summer keep the protagonist warm in the winter.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-71751734069286357682017-01-09T09:58:04.081-08:002017-01-09T09:58:04.081-08:00Marriage sort of seals the deal, doesn't it?Marriage sort of seals the deal, doesn't it?Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-85719362004269623152017-01-09T02:21:54.884-08:002017-01-09T02:21:54.884-08:00There is so much unsaid, so many unanswered questi...There is so much unsaid, so many unanswered questions! An intriguing and teasing work!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-41211276781009838312017-01-08T19:31:55.437-08:002017-01-08T19:31:55.437-08:00Brings back some memories both beautiful and sad.....Brings back some memories both beautiful and sad...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-38202189345032484052017-01-08T16:06:45.681-08:002017-01-08T16:06:45.681-08:00This is so romantic and wrenching - and rather yea...This is so romantic and wrenching - and rather yearning as well, I think. You do these story-esque romantic pieces so well, Robin. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-14893739613512482072017-01-08T15:43:43.208-08:002017-01-08T15:43:43.208-08:00Ouch! I guess that's better than a "Dear ...Ouch! I guess that's better than a "Dear John" :)<br />A wonderfully told story/poem.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-23122228722708408012017-01-08T14:10:14.662-08:002017-01-08T14:10:14.662-08:00Utterly romantic, and beautifully writrten! Put me...Utterly romantic, and beautifully writrten! Put me in mind of some favourite songs – The Isle of Capri; Rose, Rose, I love You; Jamaica Farewell.... Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-21461515438145494162017-01-08T13:25:53.128-08:002017-01-08T13:25:53.128-08:00Sad and beautiful.Sad and beautiful.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-38713889437929088612017-01-08T07:53:22.745-08:002017-01-08T07:53:22.745-08:00Your metaphor perfectly conveys the ebb and flow o...Your metaphor perfectly conveys the ebb and flow of relationships. Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-68080868937511383892017-01-08T06:40:20.625-08:002017-01-08T06:40:20.625-08:00Oh, such a sad and romantic story. Very beautifull...Oh, such a sad and romantic story. Very beautifully done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-11122785830878977762017-01-08T06:12:26.698-08:002017-01-08T06:12:26.698-08:00I like the juxtaposition of happy and saddness. A ...I like the juxtaposition of happy and saddness. A piece of writing that I certainly enjoyed reading.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-19156759690995200182017-01-08T06:11:31.888-08:002017-01-08T06:11:31.888-08:00Excellent piece.Excellent piece.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-91104690465913513012017-01-08T05:55:42.374-08:002017-01-08T05:55:42.374-08:00I so like the use of the tide to frame the moment....I so like the use of the tide to frame the moment. The ebb and flow of chance and moments at the edges of something much more fixed and unmoving (the sea itself - and here the marriage). nice! Ostensible Truthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08775793995809226782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-46956501647957348762017-01-08T04:33:08.343-08:002017-01-08T04:33:08.343-08:00A beautiful experience short-lived...*sigh*A beautiful experience short-lived...*sigh*Khaya Ronkainenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06286352495379234651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-50893668917520842632017-01-08T02:50:37.747-08:002017-01-08T02:50:37.747-08:00ah, the memories!
the relationship was like the ti...ah, the memories!<br />the relationship was like the tides..dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-19917803437205056352017-01-08T01:58:52.909-08:002017-01-08T01:58:52.909-08:00The end line is a punch in the guts - finely craft...The end line is a punch in the guts - finely crafted Old EggJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-58018938892261017822017-01-08T01:57:50.963-08:002017-01-08T01:57:50.963-08:00nice. love unrequited? but we are rich for these a...nice. love unrequited? but we are rich for these are we not? your wealth comes out in these words. graciasMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-82987848063646326162017-01-07T23:41:17.238-08:002017-01-07T23:41:17.238-08:00Sadly so often these thing happens. A treasure to ...Sadly so often these thing happens. A treasure to keep... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-60402955798850668062017-01-07T23:24:47.015-08:002017-01-07T23:24:47.015-08:00Beautiful while it lasted!! Your romantic poems ne...Beautiful while it lasted!! Your romantic poems never fail to please!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com