tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post5404434755287293489..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Ahuahu returns to the village (Part 11)Old Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-21679853237046448752011-09-25T11:05:02.223-07:002011-09-25T11:05:02.223-07:00They have such interesting give and take in their ...They have such interesting give and take in their relationship. I'm really glad they are moving, because Ahu is right. They are not appreciated nearly enough.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-34592257253196061152011-09-07T08:58:06.995-07:002011-09-07T08:58:06.995-07:00As your story coasts along, it becomes more and mo...As your story coasts along, it becomes more and more interesting!! The story ends with one word line "Tomorrow" and so much can happen by then or everything happens tomorrow!! Wow the prompt used well too!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-68476644659042003542011-09-06T05:50:25.979-07:002011-09-06T05:50:25.979-07:00Awwww Beautiful love story. You make it come so ...Awwww Beautiful love story. You make it come so alive. You can 'see' into the mud huts, smell the smoke, see the crude fishing boats and the wading birds feeding in the stream.<br />Fabulous story and, writing.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-31863507012142561802011-09-06T02:50:10.861-07:002011-09-06T02:50:10.861-07:00This story is so good that it must be allowed to r...This story is so good that it must be allowed to run its natural course. Don't you dare wind it up before its logical time. I am impressed beyond words.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-35494179300318533082011-09-05T22:09:56.812-07:002011-09-05T22:09:56.812-07:00Well, I am glad one of them has good sense. But th...Well, I am glad one of them has good sense. But that "tomorrow" contains so much potential for good, and for so much bad. There is such an "easy" tone, gentle even, to your writing, I don't mind not knowing what will happen next. I just enjoy the unfolding of the story. Very nice. Thank you.Kwee Cats and Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16650228469037436925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-55906392477952800322011-09-05T15:33:30.429-07:002011-09-05T15:33:30.429-07:00Your work is so different from everything else I r...Your work is so different from everything else I read. Brilliant.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-14255077230955515732011-09-05T01:02:57.220-07:002011-09-05T01:02:57.220-07:00Beautiful story, I 'felt it' as well as se...Beautiful story, I 'felt it' as well as seeing the pictures your words painted. You capture the love so well. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-52336137920606175392011-09-04T12:29:08.719-07:002011-09-04T12:29:08.719-07:00I feel sorry for Ahuahu... he felt as if he belong...I feel sorry for Ahuahu... he felt as if he belonged in the village, and they were just using him. But he's with Ahu and Tangaroa again, and that makes everything all right.Abigail Buntinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14993797228034911245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-82106710609782557442011-09-04T09:28:40.029-07:002011-09-04T09:28:40.029-07:00Brilliant last line..and the hands on the hips..I ...Brilliant last line..and the hands on the hips..I saw..it is gentle..loving..and there is such a pull between the wider sense of family..and the smaller one..this story is evolving beautifully..Jae<br />(ps I am not sure if it made Australian news but there was a paralysed man who captained a micro-flight from the UK to Sydney..for some reason it reminded me of how Ahuahu and how it is possible to get anywhere..anyhow..if there is a will to)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com