tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post3852228326030402275..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Lucy and meOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-51582106412328934982011-03-08T12:48:23.435-08:002011-03-08T12:48:23.435-08:00What a curious tale. I am entranced, but feel as ...What a curious tale. I am entranced, but feel as if I want to know more. What a difficult situation - but one that seems to have its resolve in the near future.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-44847459462601117842011-03-07T03:45:08.865-08:002011-03-07T03:45:08.865-08:00well late to the party again! Now you have me won...well late to the party again! Now you have me wondering exactly what happened to Jack? Tidy accident? Seems like a lot of guilt...Oh my goodness!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-84212733770706864032011-03-06T22:42:24.006-08:002011-03-06T22:42:24.006-08:00Promises we keep are not always the ones we want.....Promises we keep are not always the ones we want... this is a fascinating relationship. I agree with Linda May: There is more to be mined here, Robin. Loved it.<br /><br />I was later, but better late than never:<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/03/06/affinity-for-coffee/<br /><br />Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-72166755763950835102011-03-05T16:47:30.050-08:002011-03-05T16:47:30.050-08:00Hmmmm I am awaiting the next installment.Hmmmm I am awaiting the next installment.linda mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426368991644308588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-31637337145497130402011-03-05T09:57:33.695-08:002011-03-05T09:57:33.695-08:00The story sounds almost wicked but her, logically ...The story sounds almost wicked but her, logically they *can* do it. That's a crisp write up and I enjoyed reading it.<br /><br />I had a busy week so I saved your blog for the weekend when I can enjoy it :)ererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680330275107474948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-28564636911499976362011-03-05T04:38:51.611-08:002011-03-05T04:38:51.611-08:00I don't see this relationship turning out so w...I don't see this relationship turning out so well! Well-written, interesting story; wouldn't mind seeing this expanded. Thanks for your comment over at my place, since it prompted me to come over here and see your fine work.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-22885593391848185812011-03-03T15:00:35.952-08:002011-03-03T15:00:35.952-08:00mmmmm, just realized that people are writing stori...mmmmm, just realized that people are writing stories here rather than poetry. Never could fit into the rules very well. Let me know if I need to put my poems in paragraph form so you will think it is a story. Love this piece. Maybe you inspire me to try story writing. Have told the children stories for years. Thanks for visiting me! hugs, patpatceganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05215631272813490203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-56861289532554474592011-03-03T06:49:09.201-08:002011-03-03T06:49:09.201-08:00I like the humanity in this - the strong sense of ...I like the humanity in this - the strong sense of human nature. This piece flows very well.Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-57981134131097994492011-03-03T06:33:16.184-08:002011-03-03T06:33:16.184-08:00I want to be there when the family figures it out....I want to be there when the family figures it out. You'll tell us all about that, won't you?Monica Manninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15261586665831377609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-85581661369380842892011-03-03T03:26:56.149-08:002011-03-03T03:26:56.149-08:00What a gem! 'a match and a matchbox'..love...What a gem! 'a match and a matchbox'..love the subtle use of the prompt..and I wonder who will go up in flames..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-43748395425571683552011-03-03T00:58:04.865-08:002011-03-03T00:58:04.865-08:00You couldn't get further from Maisie if you tr...You couldn't get further from Maisie if you tried. A very entertaining story, and with a moral to it as well: Always keep your promises!!Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-88730108727535793782011-03-03T00:14:47.988-08:002011-03-03T00:14:47.988-08:00Oooh, a beleivable tale laden with so many emotion...Oooh, a beleivable tale laden with so many emotions and the ending gave me goose pimples.Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-63658862383170424982011-03-02T23:51:32.039-08:002011-03-02T23:51:32.039-08:00Cleverly done, with just enough left out of the en...Cleverly done, with just enough left out of the end to make the reader wonder.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-64784921003661523102011-03-02T19:56:39.310-08:002011-03-02T19:56:39.310-08:00Great story.Nice suprise.Great story.Nice suprise.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-6429027340423018562011-03-02T18:32:25.879-08:002011-03-02T18:32:25.879-08:00I always enjoy a story that flows so smoothly I ha...I always enjoy a story that flows so smoothly I have to search for the three words. . . somehow, in the interesting pull of the story, I had forgotten to look.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-89971430865426180122011-03-02T17:43:19.747-08:002011-03-02T17:43:19.747-08:00I agree with Julie. It is always a pleasure in a ...I agree with Julie. It is always a pleasure in a story to be surprised at the end.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing!Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287714494263781046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-86824301285097573102011-03-02T16:05:19.611-08:002011-03-02T16:05:19.611-08:00very enjoyable and the words and story surprise me...very enjoyable and the words and story surprise me (always a good thing for a writer to hear from a reader!)<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2011/03/i-watch-a-three-word-wednesday-poem.html" rel="nofollow"> My 3WW offering. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.com