tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post3398167963921032454..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Foggy January dayOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-62322385663765970482018-01-15T21:12:02.217-08:002018-01-15T21:12:02.217-08:00What sane person would walk in dense fog
like taki...What sane person would walk in dense fog<br />like taking a stroll down a dark shady lane<br /><br />It is a tragedy to be caught in such a situation.Often it is not of choice but on account of tough luck. God forbid!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-22162156295291344542018-01-15T16:35:49.086-08:002018-01-15T16:35:49.086-08:00I hear the train whistle but can't see the tra...I hear the train whistle but can't see the train. colleen Looseleafnoteshttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-33039722050847465572018-01-15T13:32:38.234-08:002018-01-15T13:32:38.234-08:00Well-chosen illustration and words that conjure cl...Well-chosen illustration and words that conjure clear images.Colonialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07557767445598681641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-68703871657610895072018-01-15T02:21:21.319-08:002018-01-15T02:21:21.319-08:00Lovely mystery here.
I can remember as a child wal...Lovely mystery here.<br />I can remember as a child walking to church with my family. We entered a street and were immediately met with almost no visibility fog, which mysteriously disappeared as we exited the street at the other end. Very 'Outer Limits' feel about it...<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-70627692538281201912018-01-15T01:47:55.154-08:002018-01-15T01:47:55.154-08:00Painting with words; dynamic imagery. Thank you.Painting with words; dynamic imagery. Thank you.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-62075992280111473822018-01-15T00:54:45.004-08:002018-01-15T00:54:45.004-08:00Scary and spooky!Scary and spooky!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-87924788461652421082018-01-14T17:33:56.799-08:002018-01-14T17:33:56.799-08:00You've set the scene beautifully. Some really...You've set the scene beautifully. Some really stunning writing in this. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-77155654658367638782018-01-14T13:10:36.963-08:002018-01-14T13:10:36.963-08:00The first line pulls you right in. Superstitious o...The first line pulls you right in. Superstitious or not, after that image, one can't help but feel jumpy. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-17477480107798232932018-01-14T13:08:18.339-08:002018-01-14T13:08:18.339-08:00Luv the mystery and the dare. Happy Sunday Robin
...Luv the mystery and the dare. Happy Sunday Robin<br /><br />Much💝loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-11182176209338409042018-01-14T08:25:03.451-08:002018-01-14T08:25:03.451-08:00You took us there, into the mist and mystery. Gre...You took us there, into the mist and mystery. Great write!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-38720525776821116192018-01-14T08:08:51.506-08:002018-01-14T08:08:51.506-08:00The train, the fog, the forest with no trails........The train, the fog, the forest with no trails.......very evocative. I can almost hear the train whistle.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-38463535616744866312018-01-14T08:08:10.567-08:002018-01-14T08:08:10.567-08:00There is such mystery in this... I almost imagine ...There is such mystery in this... I almost imagine this as a ghost train.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-21427472343431261472018-01-14T07:15:26.595-08:002018-01-14T07:15:26.595-08:00I could feel the fog as I tried to catch a glimpse...I could feel the fog as I tried to catch a glimpse of the figure walking in the danger zone.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-74928310254338472342018-01-14T06:24:55.245-08:002018-01-14T06:24:55.245-08:00A dangerous walk, my friend!A dangerous walk, my friend!Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-43120221689822359862018-01-14T04:56:34.613-08:002018-01-14T04:56:34.613-08:00You really created a fine atmosphere in this poem....You really created a fine atmosphere in this poem....I really could feel the feel the atmosphere of walking in the fog....and I hear the train whistle as it winds the bend in my imagination! Nice one, Robin.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-53840053019489623022018-01-14T03:40:50.370-08:002018-01-14T03:40:50.370-08:00A foggy railway station - a classic imagine of mys...A foggy railway station - a classic imagine of mystery.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-63592211203401422002018-01-14T02:25:40.731-08:002018-01-14T02:25:40.731-08:00Incredibly imagery in this one, Robin!Incredibly imagery in this one, Robin!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-33532019305661579782018-01-14T02:13:45.711-08:002018-01-14T02:13:45.711-08:00I agree you've painted a really atmospheric po...I agree you've painted a really atmospheric poem Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-74200158828752871852018-01-14T01:25:09.930-08:002018-01-14T01:25:09.930-08:00The opening lines are so atmospheric - we have a s...The opening lines are so atmospheric - we have a small steam railway not far from here and sometimes I go for a walk along the track with a friend and her dog - I love the sound of the whistle, especially in mist and fog! The alliteration of 'muffled in the mist' is very effective, too.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com