tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post2535316099799487209..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: My Scary AdventureOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-65229071823497074242009-11-07T08:53:53.410-08:002009-11-07T08:53:53.410-08:00I so much enjoyed this scary, well-told tale! The...I so much enjoyed this scary, well-told tale! The boot and black witch ladies freaked me out just as delightfully as they were supposed to. “Because you didn’t know he was dead.” Oh Lord! And yes, where is that little boy now? Will the construction advance until a house is built near where the bridge used to be and the little boy will haunt it? Perhaps he will possess a living child that moves into the new house with his or her parents… The possibilities for lives after death are indeed endless, aren’t they?! ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-68482931162724970072009-11-06T02:24:19.573-08:002009-11-06T02:24:19.573-08:00Poor little boy has been turned into a bypass, cou...Poor little boy has been turned into a bypass, couldn't it have been a school or playground. <br /><br />This piece deserves all its praise. Well done Dad.Chapter Fortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16005206439235137179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-44999411016717590432009-11-03T11:01:12.968-08:002009-11-03T11:01:12.968-08:00great narrative !! liked it :)great narrative !! liked it :)PS the Pratsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03244361418371176194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-25284446569408895422009-11-02T08:21:24.864-08:002009-11-02T08:21:24.864-08:00This is a riveting tale that held me spellbound fr...This is a riveting tale that held me spellbound from start to finish. The end is especially chilling as one pictures that little boy somewhere still trying to call his mummy.Granny Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-34226507209468726312009-11-01T20:23:51.625-08:002009-11-01T20:23:51.625-08:00this captivated me - I loved it!this captivated me - I loved it!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-62267752174969852022009-11-01T19:34:45.208-08:002009-11-01T19:34:45.208-08:00Ah, old egg, this haunting tale is excellent, from...Ah, old egg, this haunting tale is excellent, from the descriptive buildup (especially agree with excitement and fear mixed together), to the suspense and tension you create. Realistic dialogue, too. A terrific piece all around! <br />-Gel<br /><a href="http://www.SoulCrayons.typepad.com" rel="nofollow">Please drop by for a friendly visit to my writing & photography blog.</a>Gelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18126965921250934236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-53758726459230503502009-11-01T18:54:59.886-08:002009-11-01T18:54:59.886-08:00I was totally hooked!
deathly adventure
Also don&...I was totally hooked!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/10/deathly-adventure.html" rel="nofollow">deathly adventure</a><br /><br>Also don't forget to post any of your creative works at <a href="http://mondaypoetrytrainrevisited.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Monday Poetry Train Revisited</a>!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-58499725324653613432009-11-01T16:34:21.480-08:002009-11-01T16:34:21.480-08:00Well told tale. I held my breath the whole time.Well told tale. I held my breath the whole time.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-51581473542801484462009-11-01T14:14:53.048-08:002009-11-01T14:14:53.048-08:00This is a wonderful story among many here. I espe...This is a wonderful story among many here. I especially like this one and the way it draws one along without being overly obvious in where it is going.<br /><br />Miss DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-84751360256075029032009-11-01T09:46:46.282-08:002009-11-01T09:46:46.282-08:00great story, true or otherwise.. You write it as i...great story, true or otherwise.. You write it as if it were real. Easy to read and easy to follow. Enjoyed it. nice writingGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-49667838328342739092009-10-31T23:56:39.093-07:002009-10-31T23:56:39.093-07:00Spooky,,,nice oneSpooky,,,nice oneJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.com