tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post1575667639527080411..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Totally aloneOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-17221989623661679842015-08-17T03:49:36.358-07:002015-08-17T03:49:36.358-07:00Good poem and clever use of the word sack, Robin. ...Good poem and clever use of the word sack, Robin. Nicely done.Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-42685109938810563112015-08-16T20:26:46.398-07:002015-08-16T20:26:46.398-07:00"Engines of desire"---I like that."Engines of desire"---I like that.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-86107925731617660412015-08-16T13:44:59.366-07:002015-08-16T13:44:59.366-07:00Did she get away or escape, like that fish who spi...Did she get away or escape, like that fish who spits out the hook just as it breaks water and the one holding the now empty line sees how truly huge it was? Like the haiku format, seems to emphasize the committed effort of the speaker to not let loose all those feelings of disappointment and loss.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-38910907752126760992015-08-16T09:25:02.535-07:002015-08-16T09:25:02.535-07:00Ah, the one that got away. Perhaps it was for the ...Ah, the one that got away. Perhaps it was for the best.<br /><br /><a href="http://keithsramblings.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Visit Keith's Ramblings!</a>Keith's ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-45342977608407747342015-08-15T23:52:49.076-07:002015-08-15T23:52:49.076-07:00Unrequited love! The engines of desire (single cy...Unrequited love! The engines of desire (single cylinder, reciprocating?) is a powerful image. Nice compact use of the words.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.com