tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post1158482066014353222..comments2023-09-13T03:10:36.690-07:00Comments on Robin's Nest: Walking aloneOld Egghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-18957619766318320622012-09-29T18:54:25.695-07:002012-09-29T18:54:25.695-07:00We always miss what we do not have, and mourn what...We always miss what we do not have, and mourn what we've lost. Odd, if we've not had it, how do we know we should miss it?<br /><br />I like this one, yes.<br />Thank you.<br />Kwee Cats and Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16650228469037436925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-10483371465814191702012-09-22T01:23:24.027-07:002012-09-22T01:23:24.027-07:00Shown the door'......Not original, but in the ...Shown the door'......Not original, but in the concept of this poem it has a real ring of finality.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-44325246723346754792012-09-21T15:12:25.139-07:002012-09-21T15:12:25.139-07:00This piece is so touching and sad! I can't bel...This piece is so touching and sad! I can't believe you've fallen from grace. It seems impossible given your sensitivity. Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-4864274454185424922012-09-21T10:16:54.773-07:002012-09-21T10:16:54.773-07:00Was never good at writing haikus or senryus for th...Was never good at writing haikus or senryus for that matter ...but this one made me pause and think and sent an "autumny" lump down my throat :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00682079794113803168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-14035890608518071202012-09-21T07:23:14.123-07:002012-09-21T07:23:14.123-07:00How very sad. In the end it feels as inevitable as...How very sad. In the end it feels as inevitable as our seasons. Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-83844877382439040942012-09-21T04:55:11.208-07:002012-09-21T04:55:11.208-07:00And a cold winter approaches, I fear.And a cold winter approaches, I fear.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-52158903528645932092012-09-20T19:35:26.474-07:002012-09-20T19:35:26.474-07:00My kind of writing. I like this.My kind of writing. I like this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09165856181203327927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-2057847333265251872012-09-20T10:22:10.593-07:002012-09-20T10:22:10.593-07:00Cold..lonely..harsh..words like a bare tree..( in ...Cold..lonely..harsh..words like a bare tree..( in a beautiful way) Jae Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-41418423389363242852012-09-20T04:41:37.255-07:002012-09-20T04:41:37.255-07:00The poem conveys its sadness very well. "Tea...The poem conveys its sadness very well. "Tears like autumn leaves" is a wonderful line, especially for this time of year!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-22636507427278626092012-09-20T04:17:44.945-07:002012-09-20T04:17:44.945-07:00Fine, fine work here--very moving, beautifully sad...Fine, fine work here--very moving, beautifully sad. The closing simile is absolutely perfect. Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-35707156925822553602012-09-20T02:38:40.430-07:002012-09-20T02:38:40.430-07:00Sensitive, and sentimental. But NOT sentimental &...Sensitive, and sentimental. But NOT sentimental 'twee', sentimental heartfelt. Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-85403641310355833312012-09-19T21:29:23.494-07:002012-09-19T21:29:23.494-07:00beautiful!
♥beautiful!<br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-82569131900974331252012-09-19T20:48:28.088-07:002012-09-19T20:48:28.088-07:00So short and yet so evocative. Everything is finit...So short and yet so evocative. Everything is finite. Everything changes.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-19305513558333356882012-09-19T20:06:11.863-07:002012-09-19T20:06:11.863-07:00Such a lot can be felt from so little words.Such a lot can be felt from so little words.Chapter Fortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16005206439235137179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-47138983388116457202012-09-19T17:39:12.826-07:002012-09-19T17:39:12.826-07:00I love that tear like autumn leaves.I love that tear like autumn leaves.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-41707605443358964882012-09-19T15:46:32.305-07:002012-09-19T15:46:32.305-07:00There was something about those 3 words, maybe bec...There was something about those 3 words, maybe because it's fall in my hemisphere, that reminded me of leaves and trees and lost love.<br /><br />Beautiful poem. You are a talented writer.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18119718461267453386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7642588922402729816.post-3013237148874110272012-09-19T14:36:37.192-07:002012-09-19T14:36:37.192-07:00I know we commenters are often very effusive in ou...I know we commenters are often very effusive in our praises, but I gotta tell you - I think this is the most beautifully moving and sensitive haiku ever!joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.com